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I didn't have a name in mind when I started, and I was actually basing part of the design on Red Sonja, but somehow Ryoko just came to me and sounds like a good name.
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KikaiSaigono's avatar
Hey there :)

Here's my critique you requested!

You've got the underlying basics of anatomy down, that's for sure (as in, you don't have random limbs sticking out from nowhere and some limbs shorter than others :XD: ).

The waist transition to the hips seems a bit stiff to me. When thinking about figure, the hips are usually wider than the waste (even on bigger people, their hips will usually being significantly wider than their waist). The shoulders are a bit wide, and a could way to size shoulders is by how wide their hips would be (on a normal body weight--if you are drawing a more heavy-set character, you wouldn't draw their shoulders as broad as those hips, but try and imagine how big their hips would be on a normal body weight).

The neck is a little too long and kind of separates the face from the body, making the head seem smaller than it should be.

Hope this helps :) You've got a great style so far :3